Comments on: My Lost Novel

By: Romeo

Romeo — Mon, 06 Aug 2018 22:08:50 +0000

“And I have a clear memory of Dr. Goldberg, named after my real therapist, Dr. Goldberg, who would lean over and untie my shoe when she couldn’t think of anything else to do.”

That’s a great sentence.

By: Suspended

Suspended — Sat, 04 Aug 2018 10:07:27 +0000

Loved your work of ‘fiction’ and would love to have read your first stab at a novel. You’ll probably uncover those legal books when you least expect to.

I can’t believe you threw away your teenage diaries. Why? That stuff is always hilarious to look back on.

There’s a series on Netflix, a sort of comedy club set-up, and people read excerpts from their teenage diaries. I particularly loved the one where the girl seduced Jon Bon Jovi in her school corridor. Erotic writing definitely seems a big thing with teenagers, but it’s even funnier when it’s set in a different decade.

By: Sister Wolf

Sister Wolf — Fri, 03 Aug 2018 02:32:08 +0000

LiZa – Relief from thoughts of Trump is the highest order of human kindness and I am so happy to provide it!!!!

Miranda – Wow, thank you! xoxo

David Duff: Nonetheless, I will pepper my writing, now and in perpetuity, with commas, whether they are redundant, to use your ill-conceived term, or not,

By: David Duff

David Duff — Thu, 02 Aug 2018 08:04:52 +0000

The comma after “transference” is redundant and you will stay behind after ‘skool’ and write fifty lines!

And in another of those pesky, weird coincidence-thingies which seem to plague me these days, only yesterday I came across the original script for my one and only play which – natch! – will be a world-wide smash hit *after* I am dead and ‘SoD’ (aka: Son of Duff) will get all the royalties!

Life’s a bitch and then it rains!

By: Miranda

Miranda — Wed, 01 Aug 2018 21:34:25 +0000

Love your writing! I remember Mr. Michigan. Do continue on… XO

By: LiZa

LiZa — Wed, 01 Aug 2018 17:19:33 +0000

Thank you ! And YES, I agree, fuck the Eagles. Thank you for letting me think about something other than Trump for a few minutes. This may not be War and Peace but your wonderful writing style had me riveted from the first word to the last!